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Things You Do

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whiskey
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" Things You Do "

Loud Noise
I do hear
Every time
You are near
I think its my heart
Beating so Strong
Trying to sing you a passionate song

Floating empty
I feel inside
Every time
Your by my side
I think its my tummy
Rumbling about
To get you attention
Its trying to shout

Fizziness flowing
I feel it inside
Everytime
That you walk by
I think its my blood
Pumping quickley through
Trying to tell you of the love for you


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1 posted 01-15-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hi there, Whiskey-girl.  It appears you are going through those ol' feelings again.  Good for you!  I hope this love is THE love.  As for those rumblings... well, take it from me, a chilidog with onions is NOT a good dinner idea when there's to be a walk in the moonlight.  Hugs to you, lil one.  I love your poem.
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 01-15-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Lovely poem, Whiskey!

 Nathan
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3 posted 01-15-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

The signs are clear as i can see
Yes in love is she
Good for you to feel this way
Perhaps that is what your doctor will also say
Well written and in such style
Glad you wrote such Love Lullaby



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

whiskey
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4 posted 01-15-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks guys for your nice replies  
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hi whiskey,

you brought those feelings out so well in this poem.  nice work.  enjoyed, very much.

rus
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6 posted 01-15-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

whiskey, again, another lovely poem.  Haven't been disappointed yet with your writing and I doubt I ever will [which is a good thing!].  Very nice.  Feelings like that are always nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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