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If I Could Only Have 1 More Chance

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stephen j
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0 posted 01-15-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for stephen j   Email stephen j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen j

            

       1 MORE CHANCE


IF I COULD HAVE ONLY 1 MORE CHANCE IT WOULD MEAN THE WORLD TO ME,
IF I COULD HELP YOU UNDERSTAND ALL THE THINGS I SAY,
IT WOULD MEAN THE WORLD TO ME,
I CANT HAVE THAT ONE MORE CHANCE,BECAUSE I ALREADY USED IT UP.



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1 posted 01-15-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Again not meaning to preech but you need to add more too it e.g -

What Id give to get back
The things that I would do
That one chance given would be used
To the fullest to get me back with you

But lost is my chance
No where to be found
I used it last time you let me in
Now regret I feel within

Something like that just elaberate on your original piece and lengthen it tell us how you feel ect.
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