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stephen j
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0 posted 01-15-2000 05:39 AM       View Profile for stephen j   Email stephen j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen j

    

     YOU WERE THERE BUT YOU WERENT


I HAD YOU IN MY ARMS,
BUT I COULDNT FEEL YOU

I COULD SEE YOU,
BUT YOU WERE INVISIBLE

I'D LOST SIGHT OF YOU,
I COULD NO LONGER SEE YOU
I COULD NO LONGER FEEL YOU.

YOU WERE THERE,BUT OU WERENT
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whiskey
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1 posted 01-15-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is small but got the point across well , Your emotion came through , Well done  
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-16-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Short and to the point!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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