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Nicole
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since 06-23-99
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0 posted 01-15-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

Love - it seems to me a dream
When twilight rests upon my brow
And fingers break the fragile skein
That separate the here from now

Atop a bed of silk so fair
‘Neath diamond starlight winks a’bright
Oh! Glorious eyes bold – I ensnared
Render wakefulness a futile plight

Luminous shines my pure white skin
Halo’d within a moonlit glow
Ethereal dreams don adoring grin
Cradle my body with lover’s show

Sweet be mine upon this night
Where Chronos’ rule traps us not
Within your arms, the dawn we’ll fight
Nay, Lonliness!  We deny our lot

Enrapture my senses dream lover mine
If only for our short short while
Let me taste pure love divine
Upon the lips of your tender smile

Alas - as dawn’s light creeps slowly in
I am left with naught but a gentle tear
In remembrance of I – your arms within
Your strength abolishing my every fear

Love – it seems to me a dream
And I but a lonely twilight gleam



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
© Copyright 2000 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 01-15-2000 05:24 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've described yourself very well, enjoyed the read!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
JennyLee
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2 posted 01-15-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

This is almost musical to me...you sing a sadly beautiful song here...I adored it....every
line is lyrical  


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist

Nan
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3 posted 01-15-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very, very nice, Satiate.... I wish we could see more of your work posted.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 01-15-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this so much! I think you should submit it to the main site! It would be an instant hit....very lyrical! Good job!  
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


5 posted 01-15-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Oh Satiated one - this poem was wonderful!  I love the description of love in dreams.  This poem flowed so well, and says so much of what every person must feel at some point in their life.

I also love your picture.  Surely, it must be one of your favorites.  What a sweet sweet scene.
whiskey
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6 posted 01-15-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful piece you painted the picture well , it flowed very nicely  
HelmutB
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7 posted 01-15-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sonate de Amour (if I only could write french)
Well written and flowing
Thanks for such a very nice poem
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 01-17-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

M'friend, this reminds me much of my life.
If only I could make my days match my dreams...Well done, and I LOVE your verbiage here!
Nicole
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Florida


9 posted 01-18-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

devina & JennyLee ~ Thank you very much

Nan ~ geeze, thanks!  I wish I could post more!  My muse yanno...she's a flighty one.  

PdV ~ Thank you!  I took your suggestion and submitted - my very first one!  

LngJhn ~    What a sweet one you are! Thank you

Helmut ~ Thank you for reading!

Chris ~ Don't we all..    Thanks to you m'friend.



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Andrew Scott
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10 posted 01-18-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

A most excellent read... may your dreams come true.
Martie
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11 posted 01-18-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A beautiful dream and lovely poem.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


12 posted 01-18-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A very beautiful dream....sometimes reality can be a dream.....unfortunately one can wake up out of it too!!  I liked this poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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13 posted 01-18-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Satiate, this is ever so beautiful, it flows beautifully! Truly a wonderful dream.   looking forward to reading more of your works.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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