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stephen j
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0 posted 01-15-2000 04:14 AM       View Profile for stephen j   Email stephen j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen j

                YOU SLIPPED AWAY.

            BY STEPHEN J

i had you in my arms,
but you slipped away.

i had you in my reach,
but you took a step back.

you were on the top of a hill,
but the path was to steep.

you were at the bottom of the ocean,
but i couldnt swim that deep.

i had you in my arms,
but you slipped away.




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amber
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1 posted 01-15-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

I enjoyed your poem very much, i remember how it feels to have somthing so sure, and you dont realize how much you want it until its gone. That feeling of regret can eat someone up. Welcome to passions and i will enjoy reading your future posts.
whiskey
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2 posted 01-15-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is great , wonderful peom , These feelings are not nice at all , I wish you all the best  
JamesMichael
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3 posted 01-23-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I liked this poem Stephen.   This happens to me quite a bit.  I'm going to keep trying til I find one that sticks.   James

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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-24-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I really enjoyed this..a lot said in few words  
 
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