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To my love......

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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 01-15-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


My beloved-

I lay weak beneath our innocence,
I challenge everything about you,
I play the games that cast away,
All the things you thought you knew.

My beloved-

I ask not for your apologies,
Of the past that haunts us both,
I want not of your eagerness,
That we choose not to show.

My beloved-

I have never taken more from you,
Than everything you have given,
I have always let you break me down,
Despite the life we live in.

My beloved-

I will always light your eyes,
With that childish gleam you posses,
I will never forsake our love,
For you have risen above the rest.

My beloved-

Although time has often weakened,
The truth that’s in your voice,
I need you now because I want to,
Not because I have no choice.

My beloved-

Times have changed us both,
Since the simple easy good-byes,
We’ve shared times unimaginable,
That I savor sweetly in my mind.

My beloved-

Laughter melts away,
The ice in any heart,
Reconstructs the broken lives,
That we forced to fall apart.


To my beloved here today-
I pray to god that forever you’ll stay.

Here in this silence that we have made-
My heart, and soul, are yours today.
© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
merely_a_jester
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since 01-14-2000
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Arkansas... that's all you get


1 posted 01-15-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for merely_a_jester   Email merely_a_jester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for merely_a_jester

i would just like to say thank you for writing this
it conveys deep feeling
it was not just enjoyed

merely_a_jester
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


2 posted 01-15-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Beautiful sis, I don't know what he's done to you(getting you all gushy n stuff) , but I hope he knows how lucky he is to have you loving him so much...Lil Miss "I'll never fall in love" he he...I think you already know in your heart that you're gonna make it, cause any sister of mine wouldn't fall that fast ...Love Ya

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
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3 posted 01-15-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Such sweet love you line'd up there
Such sweet love you don't find just anywhere
Very nice,enjoyed this poem.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

whiskey
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4 posted 01-15-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Such a beautiful Love you speak of , so much emotion is poured out of your words, I liked it alot  
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


5 posted 01-16-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Denise
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6 posted 01-16-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Amber! Hope you've shared it with him!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Balladeer
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7 posted 01-16-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A very good display of emotions here, Amber.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


8 posted 01-16-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Such emotion Amber!!  Quite Deep and very well written!!  

Bridgette  
amber
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los banos, ca,


9 posted 01-16-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

Thanks to you all for your comments, i am glad that you enjoyed, and sister of course i was gonna be the independent one that never needed anyone. I guess i proved myself wrong.
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