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amber
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 2000-01-15 04:12 AM

My beloved-

I lay weak beneath our innocence,
I challenge everything about you,
I play the games that cast away,
All the things you thought you knew.

My beloved-

I ask not for your apologies,
Of the past that haunts us both,
I want not of your eagerness,
That we choose not to show.

My beloved-

I have never taken more from you,
Than everything you have given,
I have always let you break me down,
Despite the life we live in.

My beloved-

I will always light your eyes,
With that childish gleam you posses,
I will never forsake our love,
For you have risen above the rest.

My beloved-

Although time has often weakened,
The truth that’s in your voice,
I need you now because I want to,
Not because I have no choice.

My beloved-

Times have changed us both,
Since the simple easy good-byes,
We’ve shared times unimaginable,
That I savor sweetly in my mind.

My beloved-

Laughter melts away,
The ice in any heart,
Reconstructs the broken lives,
That we forced to fall apart.

To my beloved here today-
I pray to god that forever you’ll stay.

Here in this silence that we have made-
My heart, and soul, are yours today.

merely_a_jester
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get

1 posted 2000-01-15 04:24 AM

i would just like to say thank you for writing this
it conveys deep feeling
it was not just enjoyed

merely_a_jester

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-01-15 05:32 AM

Beautiful sis, I don't know what he's done to you(getting you all gushy n stuff)

, but I hope he knows how lucky he is to have you loving him so much...Lil Miss "I'll never fall in love" he he...I think you already know in your heart that you're gonna make it, cause any sister of mine wouldn't fall that fast

...Love Ya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

3 posted 2000-01-15 08:17 AM

Such sweet love you line'd up there
Such sweet love you don't find just anywhere
Very nice,enjoyed this poem.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2000-01-15 10:45 AM

Such a beautiful Love you speak of , so much emotion is poured out of your words, I liked it alot

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

5 posted 2000-01-16 03:18 PM

Beautiful!!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-16 04:01 PM

This is beautiful, Amber! Hope you've shared it with him!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2000-01-16 04:06 PM

A very good display of emotions here, Amber.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2000-01-16 08:15 PM

Such emotion Amber!! Quite Deep and very well written!!

Bridgette

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

9 posted 2000-01-16 11:50 PM

Thanks to you all for your comments, i am glad that you enjoyed, and sister of course i was gonna be the independent one that never needed anyone. I guess i proved myself wrong.

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