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Enotneicna
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0 posted 01-15-2000 03:56 AM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna


Young, naive and inexperienced,
never even been kissed.
Our eyes met,
you touched my hand.
My heart seemed to swell,
as if to burst.
You gave a smile,
which I returned.
When we danced,
you held me close.
Whispers in my ear,
that sent shivers to my toes.
And when our dance was done,
reluctantly released me.
We sat and talked the hours away,
watched the stars;
Heard the wind in the trees.
And when our evening ended,
Your kiss nearly stole my breath away.


 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


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amber
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los banos, ca,


1 posted 01-15-2000 04:22 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

I wish i could tell you how wonderful my first expierence was. This poem expresses that emotion beautifully. You have a wonderful way with recollecting the memories here, thanks for that glimpse into my own past.
whiskey
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2 posted 01-15-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is so sweet , that first kiss is a doosie   you have expressed that feeling well , great poem  
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 01-17-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I don't think my first one was like this but I wish it had been..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

devina
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4 posted 01-17-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

If I can remember right, my first kiss was shy and a little akward...G*  I'm glad yours was such an experience hun!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Enotneicna
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5 posted 01-17-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna

Thank you all.........that first kiss also stole my heart......we've been married for 29 years......and his kiss can still take my breath away.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


Justbleu
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6 posted 01-17-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This made me cry....so few find a love that touches once and lasts sooo very long!!  I am so happy for you!!  For you are truly blessed!!!  

Take Care
Bridgette
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7 posted 01-17-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful..especially knowing your love has lasted so long.... good one!
Denise
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8 posted 01-17-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! That's wonderful! A love to last for a lifetime...guess that first kiss said it all! : Beautiful poem!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Enotneicna
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9 posted 01-19-2000 02:05 AM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna

Again, thank you.  A friend told me once that my halfside and I are the one constant in her life.......the one thing she knows will never change.  He is my halfside.....he completes me and I him.......we do know we have been very blessed.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 01-19-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my, there is nothing as beautiful as sweet, innocent love  
SnglDad
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11 posted 01-19-2000 02:36 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

I can`t remember my first kiss but Im sure
it wasn`t anything like that.
Very sweet  
Thanx For Sharing And God Bless

                              Joel
Sonny
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12 posted 01-19-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

I also wish my first kiss could've been as magical as yours.  It's kind of hard to accomplish when your entire family is watching you from the front door, however...  You are an inspiration to have found true love with your very first kiss!

Sonny
Paul Hoekman
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13 posted 01-19-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

        



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~ViXeN~
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14 posted 01-20-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

i too wish my first kiss felt like that =)
its amazing that you can recapture something so special so well after all that time =)
Eloise
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15 posted 01-20-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Sounds like you have a very special one.  Beautiful poem.  
Dark Angel
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16 posted 01-20-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful, I too wish my first kiss was like that

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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