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The Dream

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Terri Madrid
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                     The Dream
                                by Terri Madrid

         The bouquet of sweet emotions
  fills the air with the essence of lovliness.
       Savoring the nectar from yourlips
       I hold you ever so near to my heart.
       Our eyes dance with pure merriment
    revealing our souls captivated in passion.

     Tenderness emmits from your gentle touch.
      Wake me not from this precious slumber
      I surrender to it's consuming embrace
                   I dream of you.


© Copyright 2000 Terri Madrid - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-15-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Welcome, Terri.
A very nice entrance you've made.
Nice thoughts, well said.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-15-2000).]
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I had to admit, Terri, I really enjoyed this. It was sentimental, and yet it wasn't at the same time -- almost an analysis of sentimentality? Who knows. But it was cool.

Mike
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*hides a smile because poets aren't supposed to smile, we're supposed to be depressed* i really like this poem... it's short, sweet, and to the point... not only that but it expresses beautifully the sentimentality of love between two people... i'm extremely impressed that this is only your first post... welcome to Passions and i hope to see more of your work posted soon  

sincerely,

 **jerome the boy whose brain got left out in the rain and nobody bothered to dry it off when they put it back in
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4 posted 01-15-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very nice poem , welcome to passions  
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LOL - this is very sincere and upbeat, Terri... and I always smile... no depression allowed here... even when it snows..

Welcome to Passions, and check your email...
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6 posted 01-15-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful dream, beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions, Terri!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


 
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