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Terri Madrid
New Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-01-15 01:52 AM

                     The Dream
                                by Terri Madrid

         The bouquet of sweet emotions
  fills the air with the essence of lovliness.
       Savoring the nectar from yourlips
       I hold you ever so near to my heart.
       Our eyes dance with pure merriment
    revealing our souls captivated in passion.

     Tenderness emmits from your gentle touch.
      Wake me not from this precious slumber
      I surrender to it's consuming embrace
                   I dream of you.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-01-15 02:01 AM

Welcome, Terri.
A very nice entrance you've made.
Nice thoughts, well said.
~*Marge*~
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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-15-2000).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2000-01-15 03:40 AM

I had to admit, Terri, I really enjoyed this. It was sentimental, and yet it wasn't at the same time -- almost an analysis of sentimentality? Who knows. But it was cool.

Mike

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-01-15 03:49 AM

*hides a smile because poets aren't supposed to smile, we're supposed to be depressed* i really like this poem... it's short, sweet, and to the point... not only that but it expresses beautifully the sentimentality of love between two people... i'm extremely impressed that this is only your first post... welcome to Passions and i hope to see more of your work posted soon

sincerely,

**jerome the boy whose brain got left out in the rain and nobody bothered to dry it off when they put it back in

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2000-01-15 09:13 AM

Very nice poem , welcome to passions

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2000-01-15 10:39 AM

LOL - this is very sincere and upbeat, Terri... and I always smile... no depression allowed here... even when it snows..

Welcome to Passions, and check your email...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-15 04:20 PM

Beautiful dream, beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions, Terri!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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