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The Memory of Marie #1

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Denise
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25 posted 01-15-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Tough question...I'd have handed him the letter, I think, have him read it in front of me and wait for an explanation...if it were a real 'love' letter, I'd have told him to make a choice, right then and there...
I Think......hehehehehe...Who ever knows what they'd do unless they were actually in that situation, right? Hope I never am! Of course, as usual, another wonderful tale, Balladeer!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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26 posted 01-15-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sunshine.....yep, The #1 was that it came from Open #1. Thank you for your words.

Yes, Arthur, it was basically to open the possibilities to all sides for the reader to consider, which Poet DeVine did in excellent fashion.

Denise....that's true. We don't really know until the situation is in front of us, I think. Thank you....btw, I haven't answered your e-mail because my server has been down fro two days (and still is).  
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27 posted 01-15-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm sorry to hear that, Balladeer. Hope not for too long!!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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28 posted 01-15-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

truly a wonderful poem written by the master....though I can honestly say if my faith were betrayed i would be a single man..

A marriage without trust is no marriage!
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29 posted 01-15-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Shrinking Violet   Email Shrinking Violet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shrinking Violet

At the risk of providing mere icing on the cake instead of meat and potatoes, I want to add my compliments to those already listed. I know you're a fine poet - now I know you're a great storyteller too.  Thanks for the pleasure.
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I am new still kinda new to passions and really new to poetry all together, but this is the best peice I have read in my seventeen year life. WOW!!!!!

 Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits.
 
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