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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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No Escape ~Marge Tindal~ Tender is the moment of a new love's sigh. As fresh as a breath of air waiting to be taken. I breathe you in. I am filled with your love. You awaken the very essence of what love is all about. I'd hold my breath to keep you from escaping. For keeping you is the very life of me. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice poem, Marge, you little dear I'd love to be your atmosphere!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So passionate, so refreshing, your poetry Love ya, Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer- Well, hello sweetheart. How 'bout a lesson in resuscitation? I could handle you being in my atmosphere for sure. Love ~*Marge*~ < !signature-->~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
On my way, Marge. I've got manuevers Heimlich never even heard of!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer- That's what I'm hoping for ! Don't tell me .... show me ! Oh...Hi, Elizabeth ... Passionate? Hmmmmm ! Suppose Balladeer picked up on that? Thanks lady. LOL ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love intertwining rhymes; I call them braided rhymes; my husband Dale writes them so well. The words in different stanzas - "taken", and "awaken" strike me. Stirring poem, borne of deep feelings. Lovely. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Picked up on it!? I was intoxicated by it! Twas a breath of fresh air........ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosamaree- Thank you ... and yes, your husband does them very well. I've read EVERYTHING you two have written on your web site .... absolutely a 'fir-laced' study in love if I've ever seen it. Thank you for the comments on the intertwining verses ... braided ... I like that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I liked this one too, Marge. Very much. The loose interior rhyme and the simplicity of phrasing are subtle, yet strong enough to maintain a gentle continuity...nicely done.   Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Claire for your wonderful comments. ~*Marge*~ BALLADEER - Breathe ! Breathe ! Smile ! ~Me~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Roger Leewright Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28Beaverton, OR.USA |
Very nice Marge, I would love to breathe the air in your world |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roger- Ah, join us in the breathing exercises. Thank you for 'inhaling'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love these love poems of yours Marge. Is it spring? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie- Thanks. It's ALWAYS spring in a heart open to love. You are super to respond. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Your poetry is so passionate Marge, it fills me! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Very passionate! Well done, again, Marge! Geeze...it sure is nice having you back here!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel- Well, gosh ... I thought this place was for PASSION ! Thank you ... I love writing from my soul. Denise- Thanks again, my friend. You all make it pure fun to be here. P A S S I O N A T E it is ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Marge, "No Escape" I love it! And this is quotable: "As fresh as a breath of air waiting to be taken." Rus |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rus - Thank you so very much. What a pleasant reply. I am very glad that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooh Marge, this is so beautiful. Simple, yet striking, and it certianly appeals to this mushy and in love person. Wonderful! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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