I love intertwining rhymes; I call them braided rhymes; my husband Dale writes them so well. The words in different stanzas - "taken", and "awaken" strike me. Stirring poem, borne of deep feelings. Lovely.
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
Ooh Marge, this is so beautiful. Simple, yet striking, and it certianly appeals to this mushy and in love person. Wonderful!
~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha