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No Escape

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Marge Tindal
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No Escape
~Marge Tindal~

Tender is the moment
of a new love's sigh.
As fresh
as a breath of air
waiting to be taken.

I breathe you in.
I am filled
with your love.
You awaken
the very essence
of what love
is all about.

I'd hold my breath
to keep you
from escaping.
For keeping you
is the very life of me.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Nice poem, Marge, you little dear
I'd love to be your atmosphere!  
Elizabeth Santos
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So passionate, so refreshing, your poetry
Love ya,
Liz
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Balladeer-

Well, hello sweetheart.
How 'bout a lesson in
resuscitation?

I could handle you being
in my atmosphere for sure.
Love ~*Marge*~  

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com         



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-15-2000).]
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On my way, Marge. I've got manuevers Heimlich never even heard of!!!!
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Balladeer-

That's what I'm hoping for !
Don't tell me .... show me !


Oh...Hi, Elizabeth ...
Passionate?  Hmmmmm !
Suppose Balladeer picked up on that?
Thanks lady.  LOL !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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I love intertwining rhymes; I call them braided rhymes; my husband Dale writes them so well.  The words in different stanzas - "taken", and "awaken" strike me.  Stirring poem, borne of deep feelings.  Lovely.
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Picked up on it!? I was intoxicated by it! Twas a breath of fresh air........
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Rosamaree-
Thank you ... and yes, your husband
does them very well.

I've read EVERYTHING you two have
written on your web site ....
absolutely a 'fir-laced' study in love
if I've ever seen it.

Thank you for the comments on the
intertwining verses ...
braided ... I like that.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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I liked this one too, Marge. Very much. The loose interior rhyme and the simplicity of phrasing are subtle, yet strong enough to maintain a gentle continuity...nicely done.

Dear LadyClaire



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Thank you, Claire for your
wonderful comments.
~*Marge*~


BALLADEER -
Breathe !
Breathe !
Smile !
~Me~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Very nice Marge, I would love to breathe the air in your world      
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Roger-

Ah, join us in the breathing exercises.
Thank you for 'inhaling'.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I love these love poems of yours Marge.  Is it spring?
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Martie-

Thanks.  It's ALWAYS spring
in a heart open to love.
You are super to respond.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Your poetry is so passionate Marge, it fills me!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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I agree! Very passionate! Well done, again, Marge! Geeze...it sure is nice having you back here!!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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DarkAngel-

Well, gosh ... I thought this
place was for PASSION !
Thank you ... I love writing
from my soul.  

Denise-
Thanks again, my friend.
You all make it pure fun to be here.
P A S S I O N A T E  it is !



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Hi Marge,

"No Escape"  I love it!  And this is quotable:  "As fresh as a breath of air waiting to be taken."

Rus
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Rus -

Thank you so very much.
What a pleasant reply.
I am very glad that you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Ooh Marge, this is so beautiful.  Simple, yet striking, and it certianly appeals to this mushy and in love person.  Wonderful!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

 
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