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love is like a rose
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love is like a rose |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
~Love is like a rose~ love is like a rose whos blossoms never die sensetive and precious a distraction to the wanting eye every day i wake up and press my lips to yours i feel so full of passion i want you all the more when i get to kiss you and feel your gorgeous skin everything that once was wrong all turns right again love is like a light breeze an angel from above now i know that your sweet name is another name for love. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~ViXeN~ This has a wonderful lilt to it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"a distraction to the wanting eye"...what a neat line! Vixen, this piece is so charming...I like it!  Claire |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
*beaming* I FOUND HER LOL =) MINE MNE MINE MINE MINE heheheheh |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sweet very heartfelt , Good luck to you two  I liked this alot |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very nice the way you decribe your feelings I love it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
just makes me want to say,"ahhhhhhhh"...very sweet....I love roses and i like to incorporate them into poetry...you've done an outstanding job of it... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A wonderful happy and sweet poem!! Love is wonderful!!!!! Take Care Bridgette [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Vixen! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Me like! A lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Love is indeed a grand thing, isn't it? Great work, definitely a charming piece! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
thanks guys, for all the really nice replies!!!! it really means alot!!! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
ViXeN, this is very beautiful and well written. I enjoyed it very much. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great poem Vixen, will be looking for more [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is so sweet, love it. Parker |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful Vixen! Love is like a rose, a large and beautiful flower, with nourishment it grows, full of majesty and power!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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