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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming

0 posted 2000-01-14 09:00 PM


Our thoughts were connected
Somewhere out in space.
I feel like I know you,
Though I've never seen your face.

It makes me feel better
And brightens my day,
To know you're on-line
And not far away.

I've waited so long
And I've found you at last.
To have you here with me,
What more could I ask?

It matters not that I can't see you.
For a real friend, in you, I have found.
You laugh and you listen
And bring me up when I'm down.

You tell me your secrets,
And I share with you mine.
You're so easy to talk to.
You're one of a kind.


© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-14 09:04 PM


Eloise-

This is just delightful.
I feel the same way about
my 'Unseen Friends'
Thank you for putting it so nicely,
friend.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bbuzz
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since 1999-12-17
Posts 76
Washinton State
2 posted 2000-01-14 09:09 PM


Beautiful Eloise. Isn't it the truth too! I have met a few  people who I "connected" with on the internet and know are real friends now. You sound like just such a person. Thank you. Well written.

                                  Bev

Willem
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since 1999-11-18
Posts 139
Inverness, FL, USA
3 posted 2000-01-14 09:31 PM


Eloise, This is the best expression I've ever read of the very real friendship
feelings for a 'virtual' friend on the
internet.  Did I guess right?

Willem

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
4 posted 2000-01-14 09:51 PM


Marge, a friend indeed.  Thank you.

Bev, I am honored. I, too, have met several friends on-line and it is always great to get home and have that email from that special friend waiting for you.  Thank you.

Willem, you are absolutely right.  Thank you for your kind words.

Rus Bowden
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 139

5 posted 2000-01-14 10:34 PM


Hi Eloise,

I sure connected with this marvelous poem.  Thanks for posting it.  I met my girlfriend online over a year ago.  Who would have thought?

Rus

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