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Eloise
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0 posted 01-14-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Our thoughts were connected
Somewhere out in space.
I feel like I know you,
Though I've never seen your face.

It makes me feel better
And brightens my day,
To know you're on-line
And not far away.

I've waited so long
And I've found you at last.
To have you here with me,
What more could I ask?

It matters not that I can't see you.
For a real friend, in you, I have found.
You laugh and you listen
And bring me up when I'm down.

You tell me your secrets,
And I share with you mine.
You're so easy to talk to.
You're one of a kind.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-14-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise-

This is just delightful.
I feel the same way about
my 'Unseen Friends'
Thank you for putting it so nicely,
friend.
~*Marge*~

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Bbuzz
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since 12-17-1999
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Washinton State


2 posted 01-14-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Bbuzz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bbuzz

Beautiful Eloise. Isn't it the truth too! I have met a few  people who I "connected" with on the internet and know are real friends now. You sound like just such a person. Thank you. Well written.

                                  Bev
Willem
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since 11-18-1999
Posts 141
Inverness, FL, USA


3 posted 01-14-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for Willem   Email Willem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willem

Eloise, This is the best expression I've ever read of the very real friendship
feelings for a 'virtual' friend on the
internet.  Did I guess right?

Willem
Eloise
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4 posted 01-14-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Marge, a friend indeed.  Thank you.

Bev, I am honored. I, too, have met several friends on-line and it is always great to get home and have that email from that special friend waiting for you.  Thank you.

Willem, you are absolutely right.  Thank you for your kind words.
Rus Bowden
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5 posted 01-14-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Eloise,

I sure connected with this marvelous poem.  Thanks for posting it.  I met my girlfriend online over a year ago.  Who would have thought?

Rus
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