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vandana
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0 posted 01-14-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I always had a dream about you,
When you walk by me,
I couldn't believe what I am seeing,
I always had a dream abot you,
Talking sweetly to me,
You look fine,
And you're mine,
I geet kind of crazy,
When I see you,
When you talk to me,
Darling , If you only knew,
All the things that flow,
Through my mind,
But It's just a daydream ,
I'm seeing now,
Althought I know It's unreal,
But wanted to touch you,
Wanted to feel you,
When I close my eyes,
You come and you take me,
It's so deep deep in my daydream,
It's seems It's so real,
To see you standing here,
It just a sweet dream,
Daydream,
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spiked
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1 posted 01-14-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

nice poem.
melancholy and full of feeling.
Touched me so.
Rus Bowden
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2 posted 01-14-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

hi vandana,

this is some sweet-talkin daydream.  a pleasure to read.

I geet kind of crazy,
When I see you,
When you talk to me,
Darling , If you only knew,
All the things that flow,
Through my mind,


rus

[This message has been edited by Rus Bowden (edited 01-14-2000).]
 
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