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The hurt's so deep

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tulip
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0 posted 01-14-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

How can one trust another so completely
and be torn apart?
How can you look into my eyes and I believe what you say?
How can you hold me and I feel safe?
How can I feel like you love me when you're near?
You have captured me, and left.
I hope you realize, you have hurt me, deeply.
I believed in you.



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earthspirit
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1 posted 01-14-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for earthspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for earthspirit

I definately feel this one.  We all know the pain love often leaves behind.  I still think of him daily.
devina
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2 posted 01-14-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Everyone's been here dear, just hang in there, and the one that's actually WORTH your affection will come around!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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3 posted 01-15-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I keep telling myself that every day...thanks guys!
 
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