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tulip
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0 posted 2000-01-14 01:38 AM


How can one trust another so completely
and be torn apart?
How can you look into my eyes and I believe what you say?
How can you hold me and I feel safe?
How can I feel like you love me when you're near?
You have captured me, and left.
I hope you realize, you have hurt me, deeply.
I believed in you.



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earthspirit
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since 2000-01-13
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1 posted 2000-01-14 02:23 AM


I definately feel this one.  We all know the pain love often leaves behind.  I still think of him daily.
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
2 posted 2000-01-14 02:28 AM


Everyone's been here dear, just hang in there, and the one that's actually WORTH your affection will come around!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tulip
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3 posted 2000-01-15 02:27 PM


I keep telling myself that every day...thanks guys!
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