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meg071898
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0 posted 01-14-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for meg071898   Email meg071898   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for meg071898

No one can know what the pain is like
Seemingly alive on the outside
Dying on the inside
The laughter, false smiles, and lies
They all conceal the inside
So afraid
So very afraid of letting anyone see the pain
I have to be strong
They won't understand
They can't understand
I won't let them see the tears
I am alive on the outside
But dying on the inside

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neitham
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since 12-29-1999
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1 posted 01-14-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Welcome to the family!
I could relate to this one..U have put my thoughts into your poem...very well written..
Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 01-14-2000 01:56 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

What could this pain possibly be from?
If you want people to understand ,
you have come to the right place.
The more you write the better you feel.
but now you've touched the heart of the
resident roaming harmless preacherin me.
PLEASE PRAY:
Dear God I don't know what the source of the pain is for meg but please come into her life and free her from it,show her the peace
the joy and the hope and love which is you
and in everyone of us through the Holy Spirit
through your son Jesus Christ,Amen.
whiskey
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3 posted 01-14-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sad, I feel you pain , As Paul said you've come to the right place for understanding   Welcome to passions
devina
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4 posted 01-14-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome yet again to another newcomer, I'm glad you've chosen to share your pain rather than keep it inside!!! Just remember that in all honesty...everybody needs somebody when things get rough, don't be scared to open up!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Denise
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5 posted 01-14-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Meg! Wonderful, well expressed poem! I, too, have found that the best way to deal with pain is through writing! Again, Welcome to Passions and check your email for a special surprise!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 01-14-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very sad but well done! Welcome to Passions!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 01-23-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is a nicely written poem Meg and just as surely as there are those that will hurt you there are also those that care and will Love you.   James
simplyYRREHS
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8 posted 01-23-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Salutations and Welcome! Enjoyed the thought that went into this writing.  You'll find Passions to be full of love, laughter and healing.  Enjoy!

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


hoot_owl_rn
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