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The Path

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spiked
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0 posted 01-14-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

The Path

I hurt, Iím sad
Angry and mad
I feel out of control
I want so much to see
The one I love it burnís my soul
I travel down this path
To get where I must go
To reach the person Iíve
Searched so long to find.
To feel, to know.
A love that has no boundaries,
No limits, no lows.
This love Iíve found opens me to who I am.
It shows me how much my values mean to me.
No lies just love, true love.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 01-14-2000 07:43 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I surely hope you find it, spiked....
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Well, I haven't found a love that perfect here on earth, but I sure do hope you come close!!!!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


spiked
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Thank you Nan and Denise. I wrote this for my girlfriend a couple of years ago. it was written in a few seconds without thought just moved the pencil on the paper and let it go as it wanted.

 Richard Rendall
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Spiked, There may be love without boundaries and limits, but trust me, there is no love without lows. I'm old,I know! Thank you for sharing.  P.S. You're right, love has no lies.
spiked
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5 posted 01-14-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

As I have found out many times over the lows just make the highs that much higher
Thanks
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Richard-

It is beautifully written.
And I like the way the
'pencil moved over the paper'
that's good enough for me.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rus Bowden
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hi spiked,

the greatest thing about this pem is that your feelings went down so honestly, and then you are still together after two years.  what a story behind a poem!

rus
Alwye
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It's definitely the honesty that makes this even more so a great poem than it originally would be.  Wonderful work, keep it up.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

 
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