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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Cobwebs float through somber clouds, Gossamer threads thickly weaving. Darkened feathers bring a shroud, Just as fragile hope is leaving. The world is but a surreal haze, A burial ground for newborn dreams. The banshee cries begin to raise, Slicing through shadowed moonbeams. Fingers of ice impale my heart, As my soul burns with acid tears. The sea of emotion begins to part, Purging forth my deepest of fears. A scythe glints within my nightmares, A somber symbol of an ominous future. The road of destiny is never fair, Especially when hungry the winds stir. My weary spirit painfully shatters, My only salvation slowly sinking. The last of my faith lays scattered, And I alone know what I'm thinking. The window of my soul stays locked, As I choke upon slow and foggy thoughts. Alone in my fear I dangerously walk, Reaching for life that won't be caught. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
What a dark, despairing poem  I enjoyed this one greatly, you know me. This is even more grim with what I know of what's happening. My friend, I hope that things begin to go well for you soon. I hope, I wish, I pray, these days I'm not sure what to think, but I want to see you two better.In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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earthspirit New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 7 |
I am new to this forum and this was the first poem I read. Your words are so elegant and deep, they reached right into my soul and took hold. Such a beautiful portrayal of pain. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Alwye: Great expression, kind of sad, but I guess it must have been real painful...I truly enjoyed reading this one... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellently done, Krista, as always!  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Krista, Ahh, caught like a spider would, but so much worse. This is surreal. Rus |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Dusk- Thank you for your support and caring through this. You're always there when I need a shoulder to cry on and I'll treasure that always. Hopefully things will stop being as dark as they are soon. earthspirit- Thank you very much, I'm honored to be the first poem you've read. Welcome to Passions. Neitham- Thank you very much. This was indeed a painful one to write. Sometimes writing it out is a great way to lessen the pain. dsnyder- Thank you.  Rus- Thank you too for your kindness. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow Krista...I loved this....one of your best. I can't pick a favorite verse, as all are wonder-filled Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoyed reading this....very ominous to me.....seems like the life I live!! There is sooo much out there that I often fear but truly there is no need to fear anything!!! Well written!! Take Care Bridgette |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Wonderful as always. I can definately identify with this one. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Krista, the emotion of this piece is scathing and the imagery astounding. Very impressive work, though I worry fo you because I know the darkness that brings such out of a person. I certainly hope you are not having those nightmares still. Are you? Let me know. In the meantime, I hope all gets better for you soon. Michael |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much. Michael-- It does take a lot to bring this kind of thing out of a person. There's been some very scary things happening in my life lately and sometimes its just too much. As for the nightmares, lol, yeah I'm still getting them, although only about once or twice a week. I swear, imagination is good during the day, but disasterous at night. Thank you for your kindness and concern. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful work as always, a bit on the darker side, but well written |
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