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The Society of Man |
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Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
The Society of Man The dark prison in which I was born I can not escape this heartless realm People are evil here, They don't understand me here, They want me to be like them, They tell me to think and live like them, It is really sad, It is sad because I am not them. I am originality at its peak, I understand life through a different window, A window which is sometimes clear, But usually covered with blood and dirt. The society of Man This society, This group of evil.. When orginality awakens The society will fall. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Individuality is the best part of living dear, never change who you are, and most importantly, never forget either. Those who try and change you aren't worth knowing you at all. Good poem too btw! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Wet, Loved your part about the different window. I think most poets can relate: I understand life through a different window, A window which is sometimes clear, But usually covered with blood and dirt. The society of Man Rus |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Aw, they are the ones who don't have a clue, my dear! Nice work. Corinne |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
They are the ones that dont know , You be you thats all you can be pretending to be someone your not only hurts , dont let shallow people who try change you dictate to you , you be who you are  great poem |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great Work!!!!!!!!!! |
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