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Pooh-Butt
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0 posted 01-13-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Pooh-Butt   Email Pooh-Butt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pooh-Butt

If only i would have told you sooner,
If only our hearts could have become one.
but you had your life,
and i had mine.
If only our hearts were inline,
But you were on your road and i was on mine.
Our paths just crossed for a moment in time.
Im glad they did, because you have a part of me.
A part that is now free.
Free to be your friend.
All the way up until the end.


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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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1 posted 01-14-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney


Your poem is interesting, and I enjoyed it.


[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 01-18-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 01-18-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"Our paths just crossed for a moment in time".  Great line!  There is something special about that "moment", for those who are lucky enough to have them.  The essence of your peom is significant and nice to read.

DH


simplyYRREHS
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3 posted 01-18-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Was this written for me?  I think this applies so nicely to a situation very close to home.  Enjoyed this thought process much.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


Justbleu
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4 posted 01-18-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

How Bittersweet this seems to me...reminds me of some past memories!!

Take Care
Bridgette
 
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