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The Rose from the Hearth

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 08-26-99
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northern mountains, Idaho


25 posted 01-14-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

This is equal to the old masters' work.  What a love poem!  You should publish this poem, truly. If I could ever do as well!  What exquisite rhyme and scheme and flow, it runs like a river, delighting the reader immensely!
Parker
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... the old black rum


26 posted 01-14-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Rus, Great poem, I loved the flow, it grabbed me right away. She must be special for you to write something so beautiful.

James Parker
Rus Bowden
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27 posted 01-14-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Rose,

Equal? Wow!  I'm off to bed and will need a bigger pillow now.

As to publishing, I probably will submit, but no hurry.  Need to consider the right publication.  Thank you for this suggestion and also for noticing the rhyme work this took.  Thanks Again.

Rus

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Hi James,

Yes, she is very special.  This verse could not be from me without her.  So glad the sentiment came through.  Thanks for reading.

Rus
Echo Rhayne
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28 posted 01-15-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Rus, very beautiful!!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Rus Bowden
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29 posted 01-15-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Echo,

Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment.  Such a warm welcome I have received.

Rus
Nan
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30 posted 01-15-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Pat is indeed a lucky lady....
Rus Bowden
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31 posted 01-15-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Nan,

That is a beautiful rose gif you've put there.  Thank you, so thoughtful.  And thanks for the great compliment and for reading this verse.

Rus
Astraea
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California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


32 posted 01-15-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

What a lovely picture you've painted in words.  Truly beautiful and a wonderful share.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Pepper
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33 posted 01-16-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply beautiful Rus....
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work  
Welcome to Passions!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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34 posted 01-16-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove



Beautiful indeed! WELCOME!

 <*\\\><    
Where there is faith,
           there is love.
Where there is love,
          there is peace.
Where there is peace,
            there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
        there is no need.

Hallmark




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Rus Bowden
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35 posted 01-16-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Astraea,

Thank you for your wonderful response...  And the word "lovely"   again.  Very appreciated.

Rus

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Hi Pepper,

Thank you for reading and your kind welcome with a smile    Gee... I went looking for your work unsuccessfully.  Would love to read some.

Rus

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Hi WhtDove,

O such a beautiful picture, a wonderful welcome.  Thank you.

Rus
 
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