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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 01-13-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Girl when you're with me, you make me happy.
I would walk the sea for you
because, my love is true.
You're so special to me, you're the fire to my heat,
and I'm so glad that we came to be
so, I made special reservations for this day
because, today is your birthday.
I plan to treat you like a queen,
in every single way, if you know what I mean.
I bought you a king-size bed, that's velvety red,
with the matching bed spread.
I bought you a red corvette,
that will put me in a little debt
but, I don't care because, it's your birthday.
I bought a Panasomic color TV, with the VCR.
I went that far, to steal your heart,
because, I love you.
I felt that I could be a fool for you.
That's why I bought all these expensive things,
for your room.
Girl, let me spend the night
because the moment for us, is so right.
And you don't have to cook
because, I bought a cookbook.
I'll do it all for you because, I want to.
I'm satisfying your every need today
because it's your birthday, my sweet lady.



 Nathan
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Denise
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1 posted 01-13-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! Sounds like quite a birthday, Nate!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Nate Dogg
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Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


2 posted 01-16-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you for the sweet comment Dysnder!

 Nathan
Rus Bowden
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since 01-13-2000
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3 posted 01-17-2000 10:03 AM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Nate,

Doing some catching up on reading and found this lavish birthday.  Loved this part esp:

I bought you a king-size bed, that's velvety red,
with the matching bed spread.
I bought you a red corvette,
that will put me in a little debt


Rus
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


4 posted 01-17-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Quite a birthday there Nate....a very cute poem for I take it a very sweet lady!!

Take Care
Bridgette
Michael
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5 posted 01-17-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Man, when you go all out - you go all out.
She must be very special.

Michael
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


6 posted 01-18-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Rus, Michael, and Justbleu for the nice comments.

 Nathan
whiskey
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Australia


7 posted 01-18-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

What a wonderful birthday , what a lucky lady she is to have such a romantic in you   Sweet poem
simplyYRREHS
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8 posted 01-18-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Nate~
Um, did i forget to mention that MY birthday is in a couple of months?  Great Birthday Poem, Nate...I'm sure will be graciously accepted by your queen.
Sherry
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


9 posted 01-18-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey...my birthday was Jan 4th and it didn't go anything like that.
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 01-18-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Hoot and Simply for the comments.

 Nathan
SnglDad
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since 01-08-2000
Posts 121
Seattle area


11 posted 01-18-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

She must be very special to you Nate.
She`s a very lucky woman to have a man with a heart as caring and kind as your`s.
Good luck with the bill`s..lol
and keep up the good work.
Tamera
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since 12-28-1999
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12 posted 01-18-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Very lucky lady! She must be very special to you...quite the birthday!
Tamera
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


13 posted 01-18-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Geez and you couldnt even get me a card for my birthday?  UH I see how it is hehe  cute poem!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


14 posted 01-19-2000 11:52 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Sngldad for the nice comments.
Thank you Tamera for the nice comments.
And thank you Echo for the nice comments.

 Nathan
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