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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-13 02:43 PM


Young dreams I had ,
Young love I've inside,
As I imagined I wa yours,
And you were mine,
As I was in your arms,
Weak in the knees ,
Gentle breeze comes along,
So shy to answer the question you asked,
The feeling was so good ,
As I lost my heart to you,
There in lyning your arms,
Feeling warm inside,
Beautiful day, today,
The time runs by,
We said goodbye ,
Left our secret place,
Far behind ,
Left our hearts behind,
I lay in bed all night,
And I was thinking about the love we had,
I was yours forever,
And you were my own love

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-13 06:13 PM


Beautiful poem, Vandana! Brought back memories!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-01-20 11:50 AM


Hi, since I'm new to Passions, I'm doing my homework and going back to read poetry submitted before coming aboard.  "Yours Forever" touched a nerve, because there was a secret place, now,in the shadows of my memory, where passions flowed, and would best be described by one of Hoot's eloquent poems.
Nicely done.
DH

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