How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 Yours Forever
 1 2
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Yours Forever

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 10-22-1999
Posts 10748
USA


0 posted 01-13-2000 02:43 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Young dreams I had ,
Young love I've inside,
As I imagined I wa yours,
And you were mine,
As I was in your arms,
Weak in the knees ,
Gentle breeze comes along,
So shy to answer the question you asked,
The feeling was so good ,
As I lost my heart to you,
There in lyning your arms,
Feeling warm inside,
Beautiful day, today,
The time runs by,
We said goodbye ,
Left our secret place,
Far behind ,
Left our hearts behind,
I lay in bed all night,
And I was thinking about the love we had,
I was yours forever,
And you were my own love
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


1 posted 01-13-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Vandana! Brought back memories!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


2 posted 01-20-2000 11:50 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Hi, since I'm new to Passions, I'm doing my homework and going back to read poetry submitted before coming aboard.  "Yours Forever" touched a nerve, because there was a secret place, now,in the shadows of my memory, where passions flowed, and would best be described by one of Hoot's eloquent poems.
Nicely done.
DH
vandana will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> Yours Forever Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors