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Crying

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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 01-13-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brandondinsmore

Why is it that
The Winds of Confusion]
...have chosen to blow upon me?
{Is it my demeanor}
Is it of my own doing?

The Winds are blowing harshly now,
and I cannot part my hair...

I cannot have a moment to catch my breath,
ONE moment...

I know it is because of my freshness,

     in THIS territory...

     the territory of love...

     but I know not whether I am

IN Love
     or
      Not...

 A true novice of a man when it comes to being a man at something...
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Denise
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1 posted 01-13-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nice poem, Brandon. These things can cause confusion, but time will always tell!

 Denise

Michael
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2 posted 01-13-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

If it's love, believe me you'll know it.  I've stood in that confusion too though.

Good poem.

Michael
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 01-13-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Brandon,
Well done, enjoyed the read.
brandondinsmore
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4 posted 01-13-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brandondinsmore

Thank you so very much!
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 01-18-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Ah, the "winds of confusion".  Nice choice of words.  Enjoyed the peom.
DH

 
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