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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Why is it that The Winds of Confusion] ...have chosen to blow upon me? {Is it my demeanor} Is it of my own doing? The Winds are blowing harshly now, and I cannot part my hair... I cannot have a moment to catch my breath, ONE moment... I know it is because of my freshness, in THIS territory... the territory of love... but I know not whether I am IN Love or Not... A true novice of a man when it comes to being a man at something... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nice poem, Brandon. These things can cause confusion, but time will always tell! Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If it's love, believe me you'll know it. I've stood in that confusion too though. Good poem. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brandon, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Thank you so very much! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Ah, the "winds of confusion". Nice choice of words. Enjoyed the peom. DH |
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