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suthern
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0 posted 01-13-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

Let me kiss you behind your ear
Whisper words only you can hear
Of how I tremble knowing you’re near
Let me kiss you, my love.

Let me see your eyes as you look at me
Show me desire and don’t hide your need
And I will answer your silent plea
Let me see you, my love.

Let me touch you on your sweet chest
Nuzzle a place for my head to rest
Give your pulse rate a bit of stress
Let me touch you, my love.

Let me smell your heated skin
I’ll savor your scent and we can pretend
That this dance we’ve begun will never end
Let me smell you, my love.

Let me taste you, I’ll beg for more
I want to absorb you through every pore
And take you into my very core
Let me taste you, my love.

Let me hear your soft moans of delight
As we love each other through the long night
To collapse, exhausted, at dawn’s first light
Let me hear you, my love.

Let me love you through all my days
I promise I’ll please you in so many ways
My dearest wishes this request conveys
Let me love you, my love.
© Copyright 2000 suthern - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-13-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Suthern! And a bit steamy! No guy in his right mind would turn down a request like that!

 Denise

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2 posted 01-13-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

DANNNNNGGGG Girlfriend!  It got hot in here all of a sudden! Woo Hoooo!  I love it!
Tell it like it IS!      

Printing.....


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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3 posted 01-13-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

What a delight to the senses.  Great poem, Suthern...yeah, it is getting hot in here ain't it?  


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4 posted 01-13-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Steamy? Hot? From lil ole me? *G* (innocently polishing halo)

Thank you Denise, Caroline, and Michael... very much!!!
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5 posted 01-13-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is so beautiful suthern....and you've raised the temperature here too.....I love it!!   Exquisite writing..
Saving this....


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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6 posted 01-13-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well suthern this poem was certainly worth a walk to the library...lol and no comments that a woman my age could use the exercise lol
this is beautiful, one of the most purest reflections of love I have read....simply beautiful  

 

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7 posted 01-13-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'll sneak in here and do a ditto...beautiful..

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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8 posted 01-13-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thank you, dear ladies! *S*

And Lovey... I've seen pictures of your legs and see mine every day and I'm older than you... I wouldn't even THINK about making any such comments!! *G*
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9 posted 01-13-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Well, well, well... My dear Lady Suthern I must say I'm feeling rather flush.  Very sensual… very physical… the poetic equivalent of a banana split with chocolate syrup, whip cream, nuts, sprinkled candies and a cherry topper.  Quite edible and very delicious!
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10 posted 01-13-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Pretty damn brilliant for a blonde don't ya think? And from Louisiana too?....Okay, so she's gotta big heart, brains and good looks?....what's the big deal?....Balladeer has gray hair?.....LongJohn has a big gut?..
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11 posted 01-13-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Andrew: All that??? *G* I'm impressed! Thank you!

And Toe: Blonde or not, I'm smart enough to recognize near perfection (there is that patience thang! LOL) Thanks, sweetie... to even be mentioned in the same post as LJA and Balladeer is an honor. *G*
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12 posted 01-13-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Great poem from a southern belle.
Well written
Liz
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13 posted 01-13-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Yep! All that, and more! If ya didn't notice from the icon... I reached such a degree as to melt all away. And now I'm just a big gooey mess on the floor. (And with that said, here comes the pitch right over the plate.... )
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14 posted 01-13-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Belle

*Perk*  You've seen Lovey's legs???  In peekshures????  I wanna see!  I wanna see!!!

Incidently, this poem was truly beautiful, and so well thought out.  This was easily as moving as your poem about your Dad and Mom, which I will never forget.  You are such an incredible lady!

Toe - She's got my heart and brains now???  I thought she said you had them!!  I really AM confused now.  I hate it when my heart and brains get passed around like this.  I want them back!  *tapping toe impatiently*


psst, Belle - yanno, speaking of peekshures, when are you gonna include yours with your wonderful poetry?  I think all of the PiP-ers in here oughta DEMAND a peekshure of Belle!

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-13-2000).]
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15 posted 01-13-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Elizabeth: Thank you very much!

Andrew: A perfect setup... I can hear the crack of the bat and see the ball sailing far over left field for a sure home run... but to take that swing... nope, nope, nope. *G* I'll behave... sorta. *G*

LJA: You'll have to ask the lady. *G* As for your heart and brains... You STAY confused! LOL I sure don't have them... unless you're blonde? LOL. Guess you lost them completely (if indeed they were actually yours? *G*) Thanks, sailor...
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16 posted 01-13-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

M'Lady... I expected no less from one such as yourself.  It's those unsavory types whom shall remain unmentioned that I have concern for.
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17 posted 01-13-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Yeah!  Me too, Andrew.  Those rascally scalawags are definitely unsavory.  I agree with you... (err, ahh, you weren't talking about ME, were you????)
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Ah me good man LJ... never you fret me'hardy... for I'll not speak ill of the likes of you, but more the shade of the three-legged bilge rat who dines on the refuse of poetic dregs.  Me thinks you know the scalawag of whom I refer (wink, wink).
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19 posted 01-13-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A lovely, sensual and sweetly erotic poem Southern.  I enjoyed the read.
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20 posted 01-13-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Aye, that I do, Andrew, me lad.  An' he's a ne'er do well type if'n I ever has seen wan.  The poor lass, she's all in tissie o'er him, too.  Such a shame.  Such a loss.  tsk tsk
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21 posted 01-13-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Well what shall I say...blushing?
I'm not sure if I should read such poetry (lol)
I might get addicted  
Nice poem, so light but yet so deep
I'm sure to miss such love must make someone weep
The lines add up to ecstasy
Well written shall I say to thee.
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22 posted 01-13-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thank you, Martie, for the kind comments... Helmut, for the lovely poem... and a couple of scalawags (remaining nameless to protect the guilty! *G*) for the smiles! *S*

You've all been so very kind... and I appreciate that very much! Thank you... and g'nite! *S*
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23 posted 01-14-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Yeah, I knew you were trying to dry out the bayou Auntie ... and you're making your nephew read erotic poetry ?? [innocent look] ... tsk, tsk !!

A superb piece ... SMOOCHES ...  
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24 posted 01-14-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Suthern -

Softly spoken
sultry
steamy
super
sexy

Smiles  
      


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