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Heartfelt thoughts (Echo gave me the feelings to write this)

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 01-13-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Heartfelt thoughts


My heart has been hard and sad
and this same heart has been soft and glad.
My hearts been with me thru all my sorrow
all my joy and passionate pleasure
and within reside the hopes and the dreams that I treasure.

Together we've shared some lonely heartaches
and also felt the sadness of many a heartbreak.
My heartfelt thoughts today are quite clear
they're special feelings that I hold near and dear.

My heart desires to replace my sorrow with joy and happiness,
to fill my emptiness with some warm tenderness,
and my loneliness could use a sweetly done caress,
a kiss and an intimate embrace no less.
I know my heart would Love all this loveliness.

Only one more heartfelt desire remains for this heart of mine
and that is to Love and Cherish another until the end of time.


Jameslee@jan12,2000@forEcho

"Come what sorrow can, it cannot countervail the exchange of joy that one short moment gives me in her sight".  Romeo and Juliet
"Yes, half of life, its most wonderful half, is hidden from the man who has never loved passionately."   Extract from Salviati's diary




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Michael
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1 posted 01-13-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Heartfelt, indeed, James.  This speaks so true for most every heart, I would say. May god bless Echo and you, too, for thinking of her.  Beautiful poem.

Michael
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2 posted 01-13-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sweet, a wonderful poem  
Denise
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3 posted 01-13-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely and sweet, James! I'm sure she'll love it!

 Denise

JamesMichael
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4 posted 01-13-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Michael and Whiskey and Denise for the nice comments about my poem.   I wrote this because after I had read Echo's poem titled "Hearts" I began to think once again about some ponderings that have recently been making themselves known inside my own heart.  I think that Love is like a river and Love is always there but it requires a softening of ones heart to experience that flow.  I have been experiencing this softening of my heart recently and it is a blessing.    James
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 02-04-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

James, I am glad you said something in my last poem about this, cause I had no idea.  I am glad I was able to inspire you to write something so wonderful and beautiful as this.  You have said so much in this poem and so wonderfully too!  I will miss the greatness of your poetry while I am gone.  Take care of yourself ok?!?!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-05-2000 05:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wow, Echo you made me feel really good with your nice compliments.   Have a safe and wonderful journey and check back with us when your heart whispers softly to you...Hey Echo, its time to visit your friends in Passion.   Take care,  James
WhtDove
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7 posted 02-05-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was very touching! She has a way with inspiring! Well done!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 02-05-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

SUch feelings expressed in this  
JamesMichael
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9 posted 02-05-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you WhtDove and hoot_owl I appreciate your comments.  Yes she really touched my heart and inspired these feelings.   James
Poet deVine
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10 posted 02-05-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Back to the top...these are lovely thoughts, I'm sure Echo appreciates them all!  
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 02-05-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

James, Very lovely poem, heartwarming to think that Echo inspired this, but she does inspire, and her poetry is wonderful, and so is yours. Enjoyed this very much
Liz
JamesMichael
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12 posted 02-06-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you PoetdeVine and Liz for your lovely comments...I am overwhelmed by all of the wonderful responses.   James
 
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