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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-13 09:21 AM


" Wishing on a Star "

Stars they sparkle  in the sky
As I think of you tonight
Dreams I see of you and I
Lost in eyes to where you lie

Longing for that chance to be
The moon the sun all in between
So far across a restless sea
I feel you do you think of me ?

Waiting here wanting you
Makes me feel oh so blue
My eyes they cry a single tear
To have my love to have you near

Wishing to a sky of stars
To have you hear in my arms
Will my wish tonight come true
Will I wake up next to you ?


© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-01-13 09:27 AM


*Sigh* - beautiful poem, whiskey.  Makes me want to go back to bed and dream myself...
I hate that waking up alone thing.


Michael

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-13 10:10 AM


Very nice, Whiskey!  

 Denise


HelmutB
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3 posted 2000-01-13 01:18 PM


Across the sea you say
I went 10 years ago this way
My love was an ocean far away
I know the feeling that you feel
I know how true and real
The wish to set a final seal
Hope the day is not that far away
Well written...I also must say
Love will always find a way
I know where you are it is late
Sleep and dream well there mate

whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-13 07:06 PM


Thank you Michael and Denise for your kind replies  

Thank you Helmut for you verse its wonderful  

Nate Dogg
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5 posted 2000-01-13 07:51 PM


Another beautiful creation Whiskey. I really enjoyed the poem.

 Nathan

whiskey
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6 posted 2000-01-13 11:57 PM


Thank you Nate for your reply  
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