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Wishing on a Star

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whiskey
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0 posted 01-13-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Wishing on a Star "

Stars they sparkle  in the sky
As I think of you tonight
Dreams I see of you and I
Lost in eyes to where you lie

Longing for that chance to be
The moon the sun all in between
So far across a restless sea
I feel you do you think of me ?

Waiting here wanting you
Makes me feel oh so blue
My eyes they cry a single tear
To have my love to have you near

Wishing to a sky of stars
To have you hear in my arms
Will my wish tonight come true
Will I wake up next to you ?

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-13-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

*Sigh* - beautiful poem, whiskey.  Makes me want to go back to bed and dream myself...
I hate that waking up alone thing.


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Very nice, Whiskey!  

 Denise

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Across the sea you say
I went 10 years ago this way
My love was an ocean far away
I know the feeling that you feel
I know how true and real
The wish to set a final seal
Hope the day is not that far away
Well written...I also must say
Love will always find a way
I know where you are it is late
Sleep and dream well there mate
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4 posted 01-13-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you Michael and Denise for your kind replies  

Thank you Helmut for you verse its wonderful  
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5 posted 01-13-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Another beautiful creation Whiskey. I really enjoyed the poem.

 Nathan
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Thank you Nate for your reply  
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