Sitting in Michael's Lap
"a softly seductive song
meant to lure and doom
those who revel in wrong
with impure and fetid designs..."
What a statement made here! I cannot believe that the two of you did not receive more response to this ...
What I thought when I began reading this was nothing like the way it ended -- I love the twist in the final few lines!
Excellent work, both of you -- encore!
You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.