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She Takes Me Away

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Corey Collier
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                 She Takes Me Away

Like a glistening star in the distance.  A figure approaches me with a soft and gentle touch.  It reaches out to me and I accept it with both hands as it pulls me away from the depths of hell.  Yet I have a chain dangling from me.  The figure notices it and strikes upon it with it's bright and glowing heart snapping the chain into oblivion.  And she gracefully and warmly takes me away to the awaiting stars in the sky..
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Lovely poem, Corey!  

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