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Emptiness Inside

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CrazyChick
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0 posted 01-13-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick

           Emptiness Inside

The bruises have faded away
and the tears in my eyes have dried
now all i'm left with is emptiness inside

I gave you me
everything inside i had to give
but you used it against me

You waited till you knew i was in love with you
then you tore my heart out
and threw it away

I was so blinded by your love
I couldn't see how bad things really were
I know now, that you didn't care how bad things were

When it came down to it
you would do anything to get what you wanted
no matter what happened to me

As i lay here, thinking about you
I can't help but cry

But I don't know if these tears are because
I miss being with you
or because i hate you for what you did to me

For some reason i still feel like i love you
but i know what we had, wasn't really love
i don't know what it was

I don't think i'll ever be able to forgive you
for what you did to me
but i know i will never be able to forget you either
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Corey Collier
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1 posted 01-13-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for Corey Collier   Email Corey Collier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corey Collier

Hi, I read your poem.  I know exactly how you feel.  It hurt like hell and thats why I ended up in the hospital.  I've got some poems on here now take a look you can understand how I know what you've been through.  Take care
No one can tell you how to live life.  Life is how you make it.

Corey Collier
devina
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2 posted 01-13-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sorry to hear you're having a rough time of it...hope things get better real soon..HUGS!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
whiskey
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3 posted 01-13-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sad , I too have been there, look forward thats the only way
Denise
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4 posted 01-13-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Many of us here have been there. But there is life on the other side of this nightmare.
Look forward and move on. And you don't want to forget...forgive but never forget.

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


CrazyChick
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5 posted 01-13-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you everyone !!!
Rus Bowden
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6 posted 01-13-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi CrazyChick,

How it feels, not love then what? Emptiness, the fullness disappeared.

The bruises have faded away
and the tears in my eyes have dried
now all i'm left with is emptiness inside


Rus
CrazyChick
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7 posted 01-13-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you Rus
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