Member Rara Avis
As usual, great wording and rhymes, and also very dark and almost bitter. I remember when I started, I couldn't seem to find a sense of humor in my writing, though I had plenty in real life. With such a smiley photo of you next to your poems, there's a sort of irony. I'm not knocking your work though; far from it. I am saying, though, feel free to spread out whenever, and if ever, you're ready. I'm excited to see what you could accomplish.