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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Emerald Fury Cat’s eyes Framed by dark lashes. Something exotic About their almond shape. Brown when warm and innocent; Sauciness mirrored by hazel gaze; Anger, lust and joy Shine in green. The colors of me. The eyes are the windows to the soul And mine reflect my many moods. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
They sound beautiful, Tara! Lovely poem!  Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The eyes have it.... and do tell all... Very nice, Tara... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara - As a wearer of `green eyes` ... I'd have to agree. Nicely put. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks, Nan, Denise. Marge, it amazes me every time I'm told my eyes are gren. I just wish they were that color all the time! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Tara - this is what I read - people comment on your eyes being green (lusty wench). I notice they don't say much when your eyes are brown (innocent lil thang). Hmmm - lol - I love this poem. It is really hard to write about oneself and come across without bias. You've done this so nicely. Very good poem, lil Tara - (your peekshure shows a woman who has nothing to envy regarding cats - simply lovely and exotic). |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
John, thank you very much for the comments (especially loved the "lusty wench" one). Brown eyes don't seem to be exciting enough to grab people's attention, but when they're green, people stand up and take notice! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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