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Once, Twice, Forever

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Majestic
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0 posted 01-12-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Majestic

Kiss me once
A kiss so dear
A kiss of lingering
A kiss so near

Touch me twice
Upon my face
With hands that caress
With fingers that trace

Make me your forever
Under a sky of crystal blue
The scent of the rose fills the air
As my thoughts turn to you




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Parker
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1 posted 01-13-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Majestic

Very lovely I enjoyed the read.

Parker
Michael
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2 posted 01-13-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful poem, majestic.  I've been trying to come up with a title for you.  All I can think of, (and it's a wonder I can think at all right now), is "Once, Twice, Forever".
just a suggestion.  

Michael
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3 posted 01-13-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, this is beautiful! And I like the title that Michael suggested, too!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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4 posted 01-13-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

thanks for the suggestion Micheal..I like it..and also thank you all for the comments..
 
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