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Sunshine
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Keeping It Simple…

That tenacious tingle of your touch
the one that pleases me so much;
that silvery shiver up my spine
when in your arms I am entwined;

that calming sapphire-eyed gaze,
lifts me from the deepest haze;
and your voice of deepest measure
claims me as your very treasure.

There are so many signs
of why I fell in love with you
but inwardly it’s because
you said the words “I do.”

12 January, 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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1 posted 01-12-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

AWWWWW!! Sunshine this so beautiful and so elegantly simple. I like it much!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

HelmutB
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2 posted 01-12-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Elegantly simple yes I think it's true
But I also think that this man was specially made for you.
Very nice poem

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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WildChild, thank you;
and Helmut, sometimes we are soul mates, and at all times, best friends...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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4 posted 01-12-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

"that silvery shiver up my spine"  
I always wondered how to put that feeling in words...now I know  
Very beautiful feelings here Sunshine...and written beautifully..

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  


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Sunshine
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Pepper, you may use any words of mine, at anytime, anywhere.  But watch out - they could cause some romantic moments...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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6 posted 01-12-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, I agree! This is so very beautiful, Sunshine!  

 Denise

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Thank you denise...it is easy when you have true love...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Michael
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8 posted 01-13-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Simplicity never said so much. Beautiful poem, Sunshine.  What a feeling of love this one displays.  


Michael

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Thank you, Michael, for your words of encouragement...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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a love poem! Yes! I love this!
You should write more about him.
 
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