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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-01-12 02:10 PM


Keeping It Simple…

That tenacious tingle of your touch
the one that pleases me so much;
that silvery shiver up my spine
when in your arms I am entwined;

that calming sapphire-eyed gaze,
lifts me from the deepest haze;
and your voice of deepest measure
claims me as your very treasure.

There are so many signs
of why I fell in love with you
but inwardly it’s because
you said the words “I do.”

12 January, 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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PhaerieChild
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1 posted 2000-01-12 02:13 PM


AWWWWW!! Sunshine this so beautiful and so elegantly simple. I like it much!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


HelmutB
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2 posted 2000-01-12 02:56 PM


Elegantly simple yes I think it's true
But I also think that this man was specially made for you.
Very nice poem

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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3 posted 2000-01-12 02:59 PM


WildChild, thank you;
and Helmut, sometimes we are soul mates, and at all times, best friends...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Pepper
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4 posted 2000-01-12 03:07 PM


"that silvery shiver up my spine"  
I always wondered how to put that feeling in words...now I know  
Very beautiful feelings here Sunshine...and written beautifully..< !signature-->

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  


[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-12-2000).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-01-12 03:12 PM


Pepper, you may use any words of mine, at anytime, anywhere.  But watch out - they could cause some romantic moments...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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6 posted 2000-01-12 08:07 PM


Oh, I agree! This is so very beautiful, Sunshine!  

 Denise


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7 posted 2000-01-13 09:15 AM


Thank you denise...it is easy when you have true love...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Michael
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8 posted 2000-01-13 09:22 AM


Simplicity never said so much. Beautiful poem, Sunshine.  What a feeling of love this one displays.  


Michael

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9 posted 2000-01-13 12:02 PM


Thank you, Michael, for your words of encouragement...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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10 posted 2005-04-16 05:17 PM


a love poem! Yes! I love this!
You should write more about him.

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