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Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 331


0 posted 2000-01-12 11:01 AM


No promises,
            'cause anyone can change their mind

No promises,
            'cause every day's another day

No promises,
            'cause anything can happen, so

I'll give to you and ask from you

no promises--

             I promise you.              

© Copyright 2000 Ted Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
blueyz75
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
1 posted 2000-01-12 11:37 AM


  Cute and different.  Never make promises you don't intend to keep!

Kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-12 12:09 PM


Ah Ted, I'll settle for promises kept anyday

something to this effect...

Promise that after rain
the clouds will pass
Promise that in the dark
some light will shine
Promise out of tragedy
will blossum hope
Promise that you'll give your
heart to mine
Promise that you'll stay
and never leave
Promise that you'll love me
and that's forever
Promise that we'll always
talk things out
Promise that you and I
will be together

But perhaps that's in a perfect world...nothing wrong with dreaming anyway

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2000-01-12 12:18 PM


But Ted - A promise is a promise...
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