»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #5
»
Angels
| Open Poetry #5 |
|
Angels |
|
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
|
" Angels " Angels fly way up above Showing visions of undying love Brightness contained under wing To tell us of the right they bring A beauty engulfs my face Wonder within their grace Eyes so blue , sparkle shine White cloak so divine Wings of gold breathtaking Halo high above their making Angel dust srpinkled down on me A brilliant cloud of colours I see In my eyes the dust it falls Angels see angels rules Dust it clears not to be seen Angels not where once had been |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Very pretty imagery here  Nicely done!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
||
|
Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Whiskey - Very nice poem. I like the topic for it has so much room for diversity. The way you approached it conveys a new perspective of love and how infectious it can be...especially love that descends from the heavens. Sonny |
||
|
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Caroline and Sonny for your lovely replies |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Whiskey! I am getting from this that perspective is the determinant to what we 'see'. Good message! Denise |
||
|
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very descript poem indeed! Keep it up! Nathan |
||
|
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Good poem, Whiskey. Love the final stanza. Michael |
||
|
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Nate and Michael for your replies |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty write |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
