How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 Angels
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Angels

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
whiskey
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
Australia


0 posted 01-12-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Angels "

Angels fly way up above
Showing visions of undying love
Brightness contained under wing
To tell us of the right they bring

A beauty engulfs my face
Wonder within their grace
Eyes so blue , sparkle shine
White cloak so divine

Wings of gold breathtaking
Halo high above their making
Angel dust srpinkled down on me
A brilliant cloud of colours I see

In my eyes the dust it falls
Angels see angels rules
Dust it clears not to be seen
Angels not where once had been

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


1 posted 01-12-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Very pretty imagery here    Nicely done!



 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Sonny
Junior Member
since 12-18-1999
Posts 41
Schenectady, NY, USA


2 posted 01-12-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

Whiskey -

     Very nice poem.  I like the topic for it has so much room for diversity.  The way you approached it conveys a new perspective of love and how infectious it can be...especially love that descends from the heavens.

Sonny

whiskey
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
Australia


3 posted 01-12-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you Caroline and Sonny for your lovely replies  
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


4 posted 01-12-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Whiskey! I am getting from this that perspective is the determinant to what we 'see'. Good message!


 Denise

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


6 posted 01-12-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Very descript poem indeed! Keep it up!

 Nathan
Michael
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


7 posted 01-12-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Good poem, Whiskey.  Love the final stanza.


Michael
whiskey
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
Australia


8 posted 01-13-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you Nate and Michael for your replies
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


9 posted 04-16-2005 05:06 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

pretty write
whiskey will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> Angels Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors