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It's Written in the Stars

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 01-12-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

It's Written in the Stars

So exquisite was our precious love
I trembled from within
Fearing it would blow away
With ever changing wind

So intangible and fragile
Are the wings of heart's own bliss
He calmed my fears one starlit night
With a gentle kiss

And then he took me by the hand
And pointed up above
And there in splendid radiance
Was written all our love

For every single tender kiss
A single star he placed
And spelled our love across the sky
In soft poetic grace

Our twinkling constellations
Filled the galaxy
And shown upon the universe
For all eternity

Elizabeth Santos


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-12-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-12-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Simply lovely
you made me float
for a moment
I feel such peace
in this piece.
  
Earthman
caroline
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2 posted 01-12-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Truly exquisite, Elizabeth!


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-12-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Elizabeth, this is simply beautiful athough that word can not do justice to the poem  
whiskey
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4 posted 01-12-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

There is no word to describe how wonderful this poem is Liz, So sweet and Beautiful , I love your work  
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-12-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
You are so talented I cannot say enough,
You have written a huricane and I a simple puff.
If you don't mind I'll keep this one,
For my heart and mind as a captive sun.
Love Sy
Sally S.
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6 posted 01-12-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Absolutely beautiful, Liz!  A poem that truly brings a warm smile. Well done!  
Mike
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7 posted 01-12-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Me likes poems that flow so smoothly not from the tongue but rather from the heart...
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 01-12-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Paul, Poetry does make you float, kind of like a crystal snowflake
Thanks,
Liz

Coroline.
I love that word "Exquisite" There is no other that says what it says, and so I use it sparingly in my verses, like the one above
Thank you
Liz

Hoot, Yes, this would be beautiful in the eyes of a romantic
Thanks,
Liz

Whiskey,
Seems you describe yourself
Thank you
Liz

Sy,
Thank you for your words of praise
To your poetic heights I never raise
But write my verses in pure elation
Thanks to your dear inspiration
Liz

Sally,
You are so kind. Thanks
Liz

Mike, From the heart come the sweetest songs
Thank you
Liz
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 01-12-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth, my friend-

So very pretty.
Heartfelt.
~*Marge*~

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Pepper
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10 posted 01-12-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very beautiful indeed Liz !!
Your writing shines as brightly as those stars.......

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 01-12-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge and Pepper, two star gazers if I ever saw one.
Thank you, dear friends
Liz
Sonny
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12 posted 01-12-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

your poetry has become my own cosmology!!!!!

Sonny
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13 posted 01-12-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Not even Toerag can think of anything smartass to write about this one Lizzie...this is fantastic kid....
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 01-12-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sonny, What a sweet remark,
Thank you
Liz

Toe, I have never known you at a loss for words that make me laugh,
so this exposes your tender loving side
Thanks,
Liz
Nan
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15 posted 01-12-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Love and the stars - They do walk hand in hand, don't they? - Very nice Elizabeth...
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16 posted 01-12-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is absolutely lovely, Elizabeth!!! *S* Or maybe my first thought said it better... "Wow!" *G*
Martie
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17 posted 01-12-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I am amazed by the brilliance that shines from you heart Liz.
Nate Dogg
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18 posted 01-12-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow! Wow! Wow! Elizabeth, your beautiful poem stands out like the North Star!

 Nathan
Denise
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19 posted 01-12-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yet another shining example of your talent, Elizabeth! Very very nice!  

 Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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20 posted 01-12-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you all, Nan, Martie, Suthrn, Nate and Denise. It seems everybody loves the stars, and I appreciate all of your comments
Liz
HelmutB
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21 posted 01-12-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Easy to read and flowing so well
The poem took me into its spell
Thank you , very nice

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Michael
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22 posted 01-12-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A lovely poem, Liz.  Very touching.


Michael
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I can only nod my head in agreement at every comment  
devina
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24 posted 01-12-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I love the way your poems tell such a beautiful story....you've done it again...made me say wow that is

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