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Can You See Me?

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angel girl
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0 posted 01-12-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

Can you see me from heaven?
Do you see me cry?
Do you know how I feel,
How I want to die?

I feel so alone
On this Vast Earth.
Why am I here,
And what is my life worth.

Do I touch others
In this desolate place?
Do they know my name?
Do they see my face?

Can you see me from heaven?
Do you see me cry?
Do you know how I feel,
How I want to die?

This mask, this charade,
This lie that I live,
It is not me.
It's just what people see.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-12-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Angel Girl-
Very nicely done...
somehow I got the wrong poem
to post to.
Anyway ......
nice, very nice.
~*Marge*~

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Michael
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2 posted 01-12-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, very powerful poem, angelgirl.  I can really relate to this poem well.  ((HUGS))

Michael
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 01-12-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Wonderful,a little sad,
I can't see your face
but I just saw your heart
and your very beautiful
Angel Girl.

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angel girl
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4 posted 01-13-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thank you all very much. Your comments mean a lot to me.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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5 posted 01-13-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I've said these very same things, Angel Girl. Very powerful, full of genuine emotion.

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


 
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