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whiskey
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0 posted 01-12-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Thoughs of you "

Thoughts that rush in to my mind
When I think of you I find
Lips I wish that I could Kiss
That gentle feeling of sweet bliss

The moment That our bodies touch
Feelings that will mean so much
I long to hold you close
And tell you of this love I boast

Your held close within my heart
Our souls together to never part
Your friendship means so much to me
forever connected we shall be
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-12-2000 05:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Whiskey, this is beautiful, with so much longing.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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2 posted 01-12-2000 05:48 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A love such as this is a precious thing.  Beautiful poem.

Michael
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3 posted 01-12-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Very sweet and worth the wait :0

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL

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4 posted 01-12-2000 06:49 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very nice, young lady.
I like.
~*Marge*~

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Paul Hoekman
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5 posted 01-12-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

WHISKEY
YOU ARE
POETRY

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6 posted 01-12-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is sweet...I like it much  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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7 posted 01-12-2000 09:23 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you to everyone for their kind replies  
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 01-12-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You are in love!
It shows
Lovely sentiments here
Liz
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9 posted 01-12-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Your love shines bright with this piece  
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 01-12-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Whiskey,
your love poetry,
is always written beautifully.

 Nathan
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11 posted 01-12-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sweet, beautiful love poem!  

 Denise

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12 posted 01-12-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sweet poem, hope your dreams come true!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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