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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-12 02:11 AM


" Thoughs of you "

Thoughts that rush in to my mind
When I think of you I find
Lips I wish that I could Kiss
That gentle feeling of sweet bliss

The moment That our bodies touch
Feelings that will mean so much
I long to hold you close
And tell you of this love I boast

Your held close within my heart
Our souls together to never part
Your friendship means so much to me
forever connected we shall be

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-01-12 05:44 AM


Whiskey, this is beautiful, with so much longing.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Michael
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2 posted 2000-01-12 05:48 AM


A love such as this is a precious thing.  Beautiful poem.

Michael

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3 posted 2000-01-12 06:14 AM


Very sweet and worth the wait :0

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-01-12 06:49 AM


Very nice, young lady.
I like.
~*Marge*~

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Paul Hoekman
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5 posted 2000-01-12 08:49 AM


WHISKEY
YOU ARE
POETRY

earthman

caroline
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6 posted 2000-01-12 08:59 AM


This is sweet...I like it much  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



whiskey
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7 posted 2000-01-12 09:23 AM


Thank you to everyone for their kind replies  
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-01-12 10:35 AM


You are in love!
It shows
Lovely sentiments here
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-01-12 12:16 PM


Your love shines bright with this piece  
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 2000-01-12 04:47 PM


Whiskey,
your love poetry,
is always written beautifully.

 Nathan

Denise
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11 posted 2000-01-12 08:33 PM


Sweet, beautiful love poem!  

 Denise


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12 posted 2000-01-12 09:11 PM


Sweet poem, hope your dreams come true!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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