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Wendy Flora
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0 posted 01-12-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Wendy Flora   Email Wendy Flora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wendy Flora

Unfurled, unrolled, undiscovered country.
Twig in water, resting before the feat
Of beauty and strength.
Touching the paper, flying long in lines
Music made visual, a kind
Of sensual sight.
Colors stream past in mingled hues
Capturing light, like a dew
Drop on a leaf.
Man and Nature in peaceful harmony
For one brief page
Of Art.
© Copyright 2000 Wendy Flora - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-12-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

VERY NICE
Wendy Flora
so well put together.
Words worth a thousand pictures.
  
Earthman
Wendy Flora
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2 posted 01-12-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Wendy Flora   Email Wendy Flora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wendy Flora

Thanks. *grin*  I didn't think anyone would reply... It's a good feeling.
-wen
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 01-12-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

You put did a good job of putting your words together. It was a very descript poem. In fact, this poem is a masterpiece.

 Nathan
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 01-12-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wendy,
Good paint, good lines, good poem.
Corinne
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state of confusion


5 posted 01-12-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

very beautiful portrait in the simple hues of life!


Corinne
Denise
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6 posted 01-12-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree, you have painted a beautiful work of art!  

 Denise

Majestic
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7 posted 01-12-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

I bow to your wisdom...nice job..
 
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