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In Response to Hoot_owl_rn's Challenge [Posted 2 January 2000]

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In Response to Hoot_owl_rn's Challenge
[Posted 2 January 2000]

My Gift To You

In cradled repose, life is dear
when He holds my soul so near;
safe am I as is the world
when He holds His little girl.

For I am a miracle, indeed its true,
that I have his love, as have you;
it's just times the larger picture we see,
until you take a look at me.

Do I surprise you that I exist?
Born of his love, I am kissed
into existence, my life will unfold;
pray that I experience growing old.

And for me, do one precious thing,
keep in mind a golden ring,
for life will circle and enfold you close;
and may you rest in His repose.

İKRJ
11 January 2000



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Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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This is nice and well to read
A tear Fell down, a tear I weep
Love is such wonder
Hit's you like a thunder
Well written and so fine
keep it up there sunshine


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Sunshine-

Absolutely lovely.
~*Marge*~

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Helmut, Marge, if you see Hoot's challenge, you will see how easily the words were to come by.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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Sunshine...how absolutely beautiful!!! A challange well met, thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece of poetry  
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Hoot, it is I who thank you for awakening my muse.  Your response is more than I could have wished for.  Thank you.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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