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In Response to Hoot_owl_rn's Challenge [Posted 2 January 2000]
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In Response to Hoot_owl_rn's Challenge [Posted 2 January 2000] |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In Response to Hoot_owl_rn's Challenge [Posted 2 January 2000] My Gift To You In cradled repose, life is dear when He holds my soul so near; safe am I as is the world when He holds His little girl. For I am a miracle, indeed its true, that I have his love, as have you; it's just times the larger picture we see, until you take a look at me. Do I surprise you that I exist? Born of his love, I am kissed into existence, my life will unfold; pray that I experience growing old. And for me, do one precious thing, keep in mind a golden ring, for life will circle and enfold you close; and may you rest in His repose. ©KRJ 11 January 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This is nice and well to read A tear Fell down, a tear I weep Love is such wonder Hit's you like a thunder Well written and so fine keep it up there sunshine The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine- Absolutely lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Helmut, Marge, if you see Hoot's challenge, you will see how easily the words were to come by. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sunshine...how absolutely beautiful!!! A challange well met, thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece of poetry  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hoot, it is I who thank you for awakening my muse. Your response is more than I could have wished for. Thank you. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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