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Rays Of Golden Love

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 01-11-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Rays Of Golden Love

I danced a song
in the early light of dawn
kissing the dew away
grasping for the stars.

Wind swept whispers
echoing softly off the moon
gently caressing the earth below
giving rhythm to the breeze.

Peeking around fluffy forms
of mist filled vaporous mounds
reaching to warm the atmosphere
with rays of golden love.
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Denise
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1 posted 01-11-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhhh...this is so beautiful, Gloria! Always a pleasure to read your work!  

 Denise

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 01-11-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful poem Lost Dreamer!

 Nathan
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 02-11-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

dsnyder: Thank-you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Nate Dogg: Thank-you so much

I am sorry it took me so long to reply back, to tell you the truth I forgot about this poem then found this paper that I penned it on, and iwas not sure if I had even posted it, so I did a search to see if I did and alas here it was with two kind responses from two very kind people. Thank-you both again.
Munda
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4 posted 02-12-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I can't believe I missed this one !
It sounds like a song and makes me feel like dancing. Beautiful poem Gloria!
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 02-16-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Hi, just read your poem and found it so delicate and refreshing.  Your unique use of words stand out in this poem, different than most appearing in this forum.
Nice!
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