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Blue Lies |
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caul Junior Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 12 |
I’m spitting blood broken and bleeding by your lies. I was beaten by your unfaithfulness and those pretty blue eyes. I’ve had enough can see what you’ve done to me love should always be honest but I guess that’s something you can’t be Why don’t you go and save us both a lot of pain, you know that we’d never end up happy if things just stay the same. Goodnight, goodbye we failed but we had a good try, it can’t be the same now that I’ve learned that pretty blue eyes can lie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Caul! This is a very sad poem filled with heartache and disappointment. Very well done. Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem and welcome to Passsions! Nathan |
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