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caul
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0 posted 01-11-2000 07:28 PM       View Profile for caul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caul



Iím spitting blood
broken and bleeding by your lies.
I was beaten by your unfaithfulness and those pretty blue eyes.

Iíve had enough
can see what youíve done to me
love should always be honest but I guess thatís something you canít be

Why donít you go
and save us both a lot of pain,
you know that weíd never end up happy if things just stay the same.

Goodnight, goodbye
we failed but we had a good  try,
it canít be the same now that Iíve learned that pretty blue eyes can lie

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Denise
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1 posted 01-11-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Caul!  This is a very sad poem filled with heartache and disappointment. Very well done.

 Denise

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 01-11-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem and welcome to Passsions!

 Nathan
 
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