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Kevin Taylor
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the sign over the gate read
Remedial God School

what had once been a garden
had also been an orchard
and was now a parking lot

with row after forgiving row
of handicap parking




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Love your strong message of irony here, Kevin, with the true handicap borne of the human dismemberment of our orchards and gardens.

Dear LadyClaire


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I agree! The irony in your writing is fabulous!  

 Denise

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