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Lost 'Love'

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Dreamer_556
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0 posted 01-11-2000 03:23 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

Lost ĎLoveí

Down the long dusty road I walk
wondering where I shall next end up.
With me I carry nothing but pride,
pride that shall not be quenched easily.
I remember you and all our times;
Such thoughts can only make me cry.

Time after time I ask myself
why my destiny was so cruel.
Although I know itís not my fault,
I canít help but feel it inside.
This hurt flows from deep beyond;
Perhaps it was I that made us cry?

You said you wanted me, loved me
and made me feel needed.
Now painful memories are all I hold,
Deceits, distrust and paper roses you gave,
Where all I offered was love and peace;
No, it was not I who made us cry.

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1 posted 01-11-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! This is so touchingly beautiful and sad! Well done!

 Denise

Dreamer_556
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Thank you Denise   Also, I must thank you for following my work throughout. It is greatly appreciated, especially coming from someone who's work is outstanding!

~*Dreamer*~
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Dreamer, such a sad piece, yet there is growth in recognition, and the ending line shows just that. Well done!

Dear LadyClaire


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4 posted 01-12-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

Thank you Claire! I agree with what you said, it is more than true.
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