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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
Lost ‘Love’ Down the long dusty road I walk wondering where I shall next end up. With me I carry nothing but pride, pride that shall not be quenched easily. I remember you and all our times; Such thoughts can only make me cry. Time after time I ask myself why my destiny was so cruel. Although I know it’s not my fault, I can’t help but feel it inside. This hurt flows from deep beyond; Perhaps it was I that made us cry? You said you wanted me, loved me and made me feel needed. Now painful memories are all I hold, Deceits, distrust and paper roses you gave, Where all I offered was love and peace; No, it was not I who made us cry. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is so touchingly beautiful and sad! Well done! Denise |
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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
Thank you Denise  Also, I must thank you for following my work throughout. It is greatly appreciated, especially coming from someone who's work is outstanding!~*Dreamer*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dreamer, such a sad piece, yet there is growth in recognition, and the ending line shows just that. Well done!  Claire |
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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
Thank you Claire! I agree with what you said, it is more than true. |
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