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Afternoon Delight |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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"Hey, look up there, up in the sky, an angel's floating by With pretty puffy wings ‘n’ curly puffy hair, oh my! I hope someday God gives us pretty wings so we can fly And bounce around on puffy clouds all day up in the sky! (That would be wonderful, Nicole!) You should have seen my friend today, oh boy, did he look cool! He wore a leather jacket, boots and shades today to school I think he really likes me 'cause he sat close to my stool Then said, “when it gets hot again, come to my swimming pool!” (Watch over, Lord, my sweet Nicole!) My tummy’s hungry, needs a snack, can we stop by the store? Can I get chocolate pretzels, chips, and maybe one thing more? I’ll do my homework really good, right down here on the floor; See all these stars? My teacher said good work is what they’re for! (My shining star, you are, Nicole!) She said to study good tonight, tomorrow is our test; My homework’s done; can I watch ‘toons’? They are the funniest; I’m not a baby, don’t take naps, but maybe I’ll just rest And wait for Mommy to get here…oh, Mom Mom, you’re the best..... ...zzzzzzzzzzz" (I love you too! Sweet dreams, Nicole!) < !signature--> Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-11-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice... liked this one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this poem is!!!  Well done! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Mike and Suthern! I'm glad you liked it! It was a fun one to write! This conversation actually took place with my granddaugther last Thursday! She is so cute! < !signature-->Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-11-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is so sweet Denise, Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved this Denise and the glimse into your life. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise ... Are we just 'puffed' up with pride and this intelligent grandchild, or what? LUCKY YOU ! I don't have any of those YET ! Something to look forward to for sure. Really delighted by this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Denise, this is a precious portrait of youth and Grandmother's pride. I enjoyed it!  Claire |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Denise: Your grand-daughter sounds adorable.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Awww, this poem is so sweet Denise! Well done too! This is definitely a favorite of mine out of all the poems of yours I've read. Nathan |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Denise...this is so precious!!! Aren't grandchildren just the best?! I know I sure do enjoy mine. Very sweet conversation. Give Nicole a hug from me. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Dark Angel, Martie, Marge, Claire Cindy, Nate and Wildchild! I'm so glad you all enjoyed it! And yep, Marge, I'm brimming with all that pride stuff! I'll give her a hug for you WildChild! They sure are the best, I agree! Thanks again for reading and commenting everybody! It's always appreciated! < !signature--> Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-11-2000).] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thank you Denise, for calling my attention to your Lovely magical-poem of Family enchantments--You did a lovely job with this, as you always do! I appreciate you, David |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those E-Cards are such a wonderful idea aren't they?! I'm glad you liked it, David! Thanks for your always kind words, too! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very cute Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise this is absolutely precious! And here's a little angel for ya!  <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very very nice poem enjoyed it. Thanks Denise The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Denise , How sweet I like it |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Ruth, Rebecca, Helmut and Whiskey for your kind words! I'm glad I captured Nicole's preciousness in this poem! For she is certainly that! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh! Denise, How did I ever miss this?! This is sooooo adorable and you know, I bet you are the best mommom in the whole world. I'm so glad I caught this before it fled to the back. So very, very precious Liz |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
this is a very cute poem...(hum,,,brb, i think i'll go hug my kids.) |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This was so sweet Denise. And grandkids just melt the heart, don't they. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Elizabeth, Keith and Eloise for reading and commenting! Kids are great, aren't they!? Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
They are the greatest, aren't they?... Great one, Denise. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Indeed they are, Nan! And one of the benefits of being home right now is that I get to spend more time with them! Thanks for reading and commenting, Nan! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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