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Different Day

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whiskey
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" Diffrent Day "

Darkness outside
The sun it hides
Stars shinning
Moon glistens
Lighting the sky
Where are you
Where am I
Across the sky
Where the sun it hides
Your day its there
For you I care
Without me you cry
Your heart it flies
Over land
Over sea
Your heart it flies
Right here to me
My day is through
Opposite to you
The darkness grows
The stars they glow
New day dawns
Soon will be morn
Without you I cry
My heart it flies
Over land
Over sea
My heart it flies
Right there to you

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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Whiskey, this piece has a very real sense of sentiment and longing. Very, very nice.

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This is sweet whiskey, lond distance love can be very difficult sometimes.
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Again, very well done, emotional piece, Whiskey! The longing comes through loud and clear!

 Denise

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This is lovely Whiskey, an emotional piece.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Thank you to everyone for their kind replies  
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Another beautiful piece Whiskey.

 Nathan
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