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Kid Pedestal
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona

0 posted 2000-01-11 03:29 AM



This is just something I wrote down instantaneously off the top of my head.

"My emotions are bleeding
On the pavement of her being.

With every look into her eyes,
I am overwhelmed with
lust.

And so I stand,
Craving the release
And
The pleasure of the moment."



[This message has been edited by Kid Pedestal (edited 01-11-2000).]

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First__Knight
Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

1 posted 2000-01-11 04:45 AM


Moving words....romantic in somany ways  

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-11 08:34 AM


In 34 words, you have said a great deal  
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