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Kid Pedestal
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0 posted 01-11-2000 03:29 AM       View Profile for Kid Pedestal   Email Kid Pedestal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kid Pedestal's Home Page   View IP for Kid Pedestal


This is just something I wrote down instantaneously off the top of my head.

"My emotions are bleeding
On the pavement of her being.

With every look into her eyes,
I am overwhelmed with
lust.

And so I stand,
Craving the release
And
The pleasure of the moment."



[This message has been edited by Kid Pedestal (edited 01-11-2000).]
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First__Knight
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1 posted 01-11-2000 04:45 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Moving words....romantic in somany ways  

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL

hoot_owl_rn
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In 34 words, you have said a great deal  
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