Member Rara Avis
Where'd you learn how to use words so well? Impossible question to answer, I'm sure. Still -- this is great poetry. I loved how your words, with seemingly disparate concepts at points, just flowed and flowed and flowed. All the images interlocked; and even though there was a touch of bitterness (sort of), at the end, the real message I got from that poem was one of beauty and great hope. I wish I were at that point; I'm still stinging. Oh well, when I'm older, I s'pose.