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Always There Inside

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TomS
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0 posted 01-10-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for TomS   Email TomS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomS

Always There Inside

What is it felt inside
A need that cuts so deep
While on my lonely ride
Her company I seek

In my head always
Has always been there
Will search all my days
For love so fair

My heart crying out
A manšs life I lead
Searching about
In such wanton need

Cutting through my heart
Through my flesh
Till breath does part
Searching for loves refresh
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Denise
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1 posted 01-10-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Fabulous, Tom! The yearning in this comes through loud and clear!      

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2 posted 01-10-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is great , I can feel your longing , well done  
hoot_owl_rn
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I like this a lot Tom...it shows your longing well  
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4 posted 01-11-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Seek and you shall find..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

 
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