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Andrew Scott
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25 posted 01-12-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Sir Balladeer:  Your poetry is chemistry, for it has all the right elements. Thumbs up on another wonderful piece of work.
Nan
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26 posted 01-12-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Oh Deer....
I don't have a dog anymore.... What do I do now???
blueyz75
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27 posted 01-12-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for blueyz75   Email blueyz75   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blueyz75's Home Page   View IP for blueyz75

Gee, what happens when you have a dog who hates men in general?  Does that mean I am destined to be an old maid?     hehe

Kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

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28 posted 01-12-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

top notch Balladeer. I've fallen in love over many a test tube in Chemistry class.
LngJhnAg
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29 posted 01-12-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Chemistry is what has our 'Deer in doubt,
The way it seems to work when he has to do without.
But that's not the only scholastic discipline,
That in the past may have gotten the best of him.

One night when our young Deer was out really late,
With a frisky lady (Trish) on a frenzied date,
She looked down and said, "Is that a stump I see?"
Deer was just as surprised, "Oh! Gee-Ah'm-a-Tree!"

It just goes to show that Deer wasn't very sharp,
He thought his stump would become a tree if it was really dark.
But things got worse when he retorted to Trish about what he saw,
"Gee, Trish, do I detect you're wearing an algae-bra?"

Well, little Trish got all upset at Balladeer's remarks,
While they were a parking and smooching in the dark.
And so she told our hero, "That's enough for me."
And from that night until this day, he's been History.

Isis
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30 posted 01-12-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Balladeer it is an amazing thing, then explain this one.  Sven and I 'found' each other, never speaking or 'seeing' one another.
Not an aura, but a mental/spiritual signal that can travel across the world.... heavy stuff.  If you ever find an answer let me know!!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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31 posted 01-12-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, boy! Home is the sailor....home from the sea. How you been, barnacle scraper? Just drop by to read my incredibly touching and romantic poetic endeavor and then tear it apart like the unfeeling cad you are? Oh, the pain! I'm gonna call Toe for sympathy. LOL!

Isis, I can't explain it but it IS true. When I see a person's words on the screen, even without seeing or being around the person, I also can feel that special emotion generate just from the contact those words provide. Spooky stuff for  sure.

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Isis
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32 posted 01-12-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Are you referring to me Pirate Balladeer?
I didn't tear it apart, I tried to EXPLAIN it isn't a visual thing. Na na na  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Isis
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33 posted 01-13-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I don't know, if you take them on word value alone, they could be piling the lies on you, and you don't know to believe or not to believe.  Anyways, I am digressing here, not only a visual thing, but a spiritual thing.
Hugs to you dear Balladeer  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


neitham
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34 posted 01-13-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Great words, makes u think  
I really enjoyed reading this one B!

myslinky
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35 posted 01-13-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for myslinky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for myslinky

You never sease to amaze me with your words.
Ive had the discussion about the chemistry between to people and no one i talk to seems to understand.
i for one thing can feel chemistry and thank God for that.!!  
keep on writting beautiful words.
Michael
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36 posted 01-13-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I'm a little late getting to this one Balladeer...but wow, what an awesome work here.  You know I can relate 100% to this one.  Applause.


Michael
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37 posted 01-13-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

as always great work    your a terrific writter
devina
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38 posted 01-13-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Well I think this poem was a hit huh???  Sorry I didn't catch it sooner...The way things are going in Devina's chemistry room- I'd be better off with a pet!   Loved your poem though..maybe one day we'll all find that answer huh?(If you find it first- you'd better e-mail me and share the secret dear!)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
LngJhnAg
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39 posted 01-13-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

'Deer - Chemistry isn't all good, yanno.  Toerag tried chemistry with his main squeeze, and it made her shed every ounce of wool.  Now he has to make his rags outta sheepskin instead.  I think that's why he went off to school - somebody told him he could get a sheepskin, and that was all it took for him.
Lorelei54
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40 posted 01-13-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

deer'...I agree with you about Chemistry...even LJA will admit that it exists between us...so don't let his teasin' get to you!  Great poem.
Iloveit
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41 posted 01-13-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

chemistry....sigh....the question of the ages...and very well written my friend...it can bring you to the heights of joy when its the right chemistry between 2 people, and to the depths of darkness when its not...nice poem...
LngJhnAg
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42 posted 01-13-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

'Deer

I apologize for not saying this sooner - this is a very good poem - tight and it really flows well.  Additionally, the story line is very consistent.  I like the way you used more than a single stanza to introduce the main theme.  You must have put in a lot of work on this peom, because it certainly shows in the quality.
Pepper
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43 posted 01-13-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lucky lady at the other end of the magnet..
Great poem Sir....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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yes, thank God for chemistry!
 
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